Most of time your Fluency
Your fluency is very good and I was very impressed! Keep up the good work. Try to remember to incorporate your connecting words like "and" and "the" to keep things flowing.
Most of time your Structure
Your sentence structure is strong. Amazing job! As a reminder, its nice to keep ideas together in a sentence - for example in the 1st passage we separated the "casino" idea away from the "guns" and "drugs" because we were talking firstly about what can be purchased (and we wouldn't purchase a casino).
Most of time your Vocabulary
Your vocabulary is great! You didn't have any questions about any of the words and you followed my own vocabulary as well. Amazing job Hailey!
